Wednesday, September 16, 2009

.. (xi).

lightning flashes
and they said, "God is laughing
         and beating his hand
         against the clouds"
and the crickets clack
         and they say, "the night
         sings, the dark hums"
and the wind blows
         and they say, "the trees
         dance, and the world walks
         with me--slings its arm
         around my shoulders"
then the smoke might
         as well be my friend
         might as well be
         my companion,
through the clacking 
night, under the blurring
of the stars
          might as well
          be my brother
          we watch
us and us only
as the lights dim
and the highway lays
          it's head on it's tail


3 comments:

aria said...

nice imagery..

God laughing and beating his hand
against the clouds makes one smile and somber at the same time..
but the progression and the end is more than that .. quite visual words you etch ..

bambooandplumblossom said...

good poem I like the end, at least you have a companion....and like a pup"..the highway lays its head on it's tail"

Perry Strange said...

aria--... lightning always makes me smile--when it's far away. I think it's part of being in a new place... I'm all about the "the seeing" just now--getting lots of imagery... directing it is tricky.

don--thanks. welcome. ...yeah, I like the thought of a "sleeping road".