how I might have lit myself on each
one, an unspoken understanding
the clasped eyes held firm
and a rueful twitch of the lip
for all the confusion in between
and the echo
--the shadow reaching out
for once, not back--
for the sake of holding oneself steady
to allow another's voice
wandering the surfaces--to return itself
--a tight grasp between them.
--and something stronger than tenderness
would be self-control.
and the fire would consume itself
into a glow--ever-brighter
until you lit the sidewalks
and made the world to sky.
and in the other--you'd wander lost
naked, despite your clothes
you'd come stripped bare
and come to yourself out of self-preservation
in the face of the wind whispering--alien
in the needles, and whatever is scuttling
in the brush--
--the chill of the lengthening shadow
--and what would be returned to you
would throw you against the sky.
and teach you anew
the names of your bones
2 comments:
"the shadow reaching out
for once, not back--"
some powerful lines there..
it seems different from your usual stuff ..
loved the penultimate para..
esp..
"you'd wander lost
naked, despite your clothes"
:)
... was thinking about other people, for once.
Ring a change on the introspection. And I believe, oddly, it's the only one I've written that deals with the... er... "other" creative urge. ;)
I saw your comment on your newest... and I was thinking the same thing (in that I--also--need some new metaphors. bah.)
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