and they said, "God is laughing
and beating his hand
against the clouds"
and the crickets clack
and they say, "the night
sings, the dark hums"
and the wind blows
and they say, "the trees
dance, and the world walks
with me--slings its arm
around my shoulders"
then the smoke might
as well be my friend
might as well be
my companion,
through the clacking
night, under the blurring
of the stars
might as well
be my brother
we watch
us and us only
as the lights dim
and the highway lays
it's head on it's tail
3 comments:
nice imagery..
God laughing and beating his hand
against the clouds makes one smile and somber at the same time..
but the progression and the end is more than that .. quite visual words you etch ..
good poem I like the end, at least you have a companion....and like a pup"..the highway lays its head on it's tail"
aria--... lightning always makes me smile--when it's far away. I think it's part of being in a new place... I'm all about the "the seeing" just now--getting lots of imagery... directing it is tricky.
don--thanks. welcome. ...yeah, I like the thought of a "sleeping road".
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